Cat's Tale

Krystal Member of Dumbledore's Army I've Been to Paradise But I've Never Been to Me Posts: 218	Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 2:51:30 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Krystal on Jul 25, 2005 2:51:30 GMT -5 I'm apprehensive but I want you to know that I believe this is an exceptionally well written story. It has held my attention for a long time which usually doesn't happen in the drama section.
	All Roads Lead Home When You Stay On The Right Path

Hogwarts Duo Professor of Transfiguration Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks but bears it out even to the edge of doom. Sonnet 116 Posts: 1,104	Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 6:15:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hogwarts Duo on Jul 25, 2005 6:15:47 GMT -5 Wow...that was a fast moving chapter but another great one. I cant' wait to see how Albus handles Daniel and I really hope Cat listens to Phoebe and stays out of the way. Please update soon!
	"When you smiled you had my undivided attention. When you laughed you had my urge to laugh with you. When you cried you had my urge to hold you. When you said you loved me, you had my heart forever.”

JKMcGonagall
Professor of Transfiguration

"It unscrews the other way, Peeves." Minerva McGonagall (OotP)

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Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 10:09:35 GMT -5

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Post by JKMcGonagall on Jul 25, 2005 10:09:35 GMT -5

"I have a feeling that both Daniel and Phoebe might die....I hope Daniel does but Phoebe though she is in the way of Albus and Minerva, I don't want anything bad to happen to her." QuillofMinerva

I agree with QuillofMinerva. That was my feeling too when I finished the last update. My, my, you are soooo good at writing action scenes. I have been on the edge of my chair through the last two. I really hope Cat obeys Phoebe and stays where she is. She is a curious little thing, but she is scared, so maybe she will. The last thing the adults need is her wandering in. Hope Phoebe can help Min.

Update soon.

Kay

And it seems to me you lived your life (Albus)
Like a candle's golden flames,
Never fading with the sunset,
When Dark times appeared.
But, your footsteps will always fall here,
Along Hogwarts hallowed halls,
And, though your magic may be gone,
Your legend never will.

(My tribute to Albus Dumbledore, with thanks to Elton John's song, Candle in the Wind.)

ginger newts Deputy Headmistress What Might Have Been: Harry and his Mum Posts: 1,137	Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 10:25:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ginger newts on Jul 25, 2005 10:25:51 GMT -5 That was a really dramatic chapter, I was scared in places. I agree with whoever said it must be hard for Minerva to hear Albus calling out to Phoebe, makes me cringe. Can't wait to see how this turns out.
	"Transfiguration is some of the most dangerous and complex magic you will learn at Hogwarts. Anyone messing around in my class will leave and not come back. You have been warned." ~Loyal Deputy Headmistress, always on the lookout for troublemakers~ "You will find that [Dumbledore] will only truly have left this school when none here are loyal to [him]."

Mellypoo622 Member of Dumbledore's Army ~!~!~!~!~!~ Posts: 219	Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 11:11:01 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mellypoo622 on Jul 25, 2005 11:11:01 GMT -5 Wow! That was intense! I loved it!!! Go Albus! lol!
	~~Melissa~~

Jaya Professor of Transfiguration Posts: 484	Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 18:30:34 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jaya on Jul 25, 2005 18:30:34 GMT -5 entry deleted
	Last Edit: Jun 5, 2007 15:41:59 GMT -5 by Jaya ~*~ Dance as if no one were watching, Sing as if no one were listening, And Live every day as if it were your last. Irish Proverb

Sensiblyquirky Professor of Transfiguration Fanfiction Goddess "Am I hideous Jane? Very Sir, you always were you know."~Jane Eyre Posts: 930	Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 18:50:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sensiblyquirky on Jul 25, 2005 18:50:13 GMT -5 oh goodness, and more tonight! This story has me running through so many emotions, good job~ Christy
	"I suppose your love will effervesce in 6 months or less. I have observed in books written by men, that period assigned as the furthest to which a husband's ardour extends...as a friend and companion, I hope never to become distasteful to my dear Master" "I think I shall like you again, and yet again; and I will make you confess I do not only like, but love you with truth, fervour, constancy."

LadyJolly Head Girl To be Forgotten is worser than Death Posts: 318	Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 19:23:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by LadyJolly on Jul 25, 2005 19:23:55 GMT -5 Whoa I hope you post more!!! really good and now I want to really read more So do update soon Lady Jolly
	To Love is to Recive a glimpse of Heaven

Kandice Preparing for N.E.W.T.s That's why they call me.....the Leader of the Pack Posts: 372	Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 20:35:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kandice on Jul 25, 2005 20:35:48 GMT -5 Okay I'm waiting for the next part! This is really good and no one is getting near the computer until I read it first.
	Do you know where you're going to? Do you like the things that life is showing you?

BlazeFourPaws Member of Dumbledore's Army I am the cat under their bed Posts: 247	Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 20:51:30 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by BlazeFourPaws on Jul 25, 2005 20:51:30 GMT -5 I need more please oh please. I love this story and I wanna know what happens. Please be okay Min. Die Daniel you evil jerk. Phoebe I love you but well you gotta go hun.
	If the world only knew the things I heard going on while hiding under the bed in that discarded tartan blanket.

Jaya Professor of Transfiguration Posts: 484	Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 20:55:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jaya on Jul 25, 2005 20:55:07 GMT -5 entry deleted
	Last Edit: Jun 5, 2007 15:42:43 GMT -5 by Jaya ~*~ Dance as if no one were watching, Sing as if no one were listening, And Live every day as if it were your last. Irish Proverb

Kandice Preparing for N.E.W.T.s That's why they call me.....the Leader of the Pack Posts: 372	Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 21:01:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kandice on Jul 25, 2005 21:01:13 GMT -5 Very hard to read but well done! I think I'll take a walk and review it in my head in a little while. Kandie
	Do you know where you're going to? Do you like the things that life is showing you?

tayryn Celebrating graduation at the Leaving Feast "Love is an irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired." ~Robert Frost Posts: 438	Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 21:03:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by tayryn on Jul 25, 2005 21:03:23 GMT -5 sniffle i still get teary-eyed at this part... no matter how many times i read it!! i have loved this story since its conception... and with each installment... i fall in love with it all over again!!
	~*~ Some people are like Slinkies... not really good for anything, but they still bring a smile to your face when you push them down a flight of stairs.

LadyJolly
Head Girl

To be Forgotten is worser than Death

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Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 21:08:45 GMT -5

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Post by LadyJolly on Jul 25, 2005 21:08:45 GMT -5

That's so sad.

I can't say that I'm glad Phoebe is gone but oh this is...Minerva and Albus can be together with Phoebe's blessing. But She's such a nice person and now she's gone. I guess it's for the best. Great chapter. Love the story so far and I hope that you will post more.

Lady Jolly

To Love is to Recive a glimpse of Heaven

Hogwarts Duo
Professor of Transfiguration

Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks but bears it out even to the edge of doom. Sonnet 116

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Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 21:18:10 GMT -5

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Post by Hogwarts Duo on Jul 25, 2005 21:18:10 GMT -5

I left you because I was jealous… of Minerva. I knew that there was something between you.”

I am so glad you allowed Phoebe to tell us what she had seen between them so many moons ago. It makes the fact that Minerva will always play second to Phoebe much easier to take for a die hard AD/MM'er like me.

This is a wonderful story and I'm really enjoying it more and more with each post.

"When you smiled you had my undivided attention. When you laughed you had my urge to laugh with you. When you cried you had my urge to hold you. When you said you loved me, you had my heart forever.”

Alesia
Professor of Transfiguration

Albus, get your hand off my bum before Severus gets jealous!

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Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 21:25:32 GMT -5

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Post by Alesia on Jul 25, 2005 21:25:32 GMT -5

Oh, my goodness that was heartwrenching. You made me cry. It is going to be incredibly hard for Albus and Minerva to get over the guilt of their love for each other. How wonderful of Phoebe but what a hard promise to ask of them. I love this story and can't wait to see how you handle the roller coaster of emotions you have us all on.

"Dumbledore would have been happier than anybody to think that there was a little more love in the world" - Minerva McGonagall

BlazeFourPaws
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I am the cat under their bed

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Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 21:55:07 GMT -5

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Post by BlazeFourPaws on Jul 25, 2005 21:55:07 GMT -5

I love this and well I'd love some more of it. I'm sad to see Phoebe go and I know more will stand in front of the two but well least Daniel is out of the picture and they are closer to fine. Please continue in this wonderful tale.

If the world only knew the things I heard going on while hiding under the bed in that discarded tartan blanket.

TartanPhoenix Professor of Transfiguration Ahh..my precious Posts: 461	Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 21:58:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by TartanPhoenix on Jul 25, 2005 21:58:27 GMT -5 It had to be done, but I am sorry to see Phoebe go. She was such a nice lady. Great story.
	"...what? Aren't you secure enough in your masculinity to wear my pink coat?" Dr. Dickinson...my new history professor.

christy Guest	Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 22:14:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by christy on Jul 25, 2005 22:14:11 GMT -5 oh that was so sad, but, as always, very well done. Christy

Mellypoo622 Member of Dumbledore's Army ~!~!~!~!~!~ Posts: 219	Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 22:27:54 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mellypoo622 on Jul 25, 2005 22:27:54 GMT -5 Wow! I'm amazed at this plot! It was such a good one, it seems so well thought out! I like how you kept us liking pheobe but found a way to give us ADMM too! I cannot wait to read more of this story! It is amazing!
	~~Melissa~~

Lady Lavendar Head Girl Posts: 331	Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 23:17:19 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lady Lavendar on Jul 25, 2005 23:17:19 GMT -5 This was a great chapter, but it was so sad as well. I really didn't want her to die. but I guess she had to so our lovely couple could be together. Well i hope to see another great update soon! LL
	We can all take a lesson from crayons. Some are beautiful, some are ugly, some are bright, some are dull, and some have weird names but they have all learned to live in the same box.

bee.
Prefect

?Professor Dumbledore is a very great wizard, Potter, he has many demands on his time-?

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Cat's Tale Jul 25, 2005 23:24:33 GMT -5

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Post by bee. on Jul 25, 2005 23:24:33 GMT -5

i can't believe my reading has gotten so far behind! it's all hats off to you and your consistant posting. i absolutley love this story, it has to be one of my favourites! Your impeccable depictions of the intense battle scenes were amazing, and of course how you portray Daniel is so intricate. btw, as a side note.... i hate his guts. I am also astounded how you managed to create Pheobe as a character we love, despite the fact that she stands in the way of what all MMAD shippers crave. So once again, hats off and post soon!
ecks oh ecks oh,
bee

"A new commandment give I unto you, that ye love one another."

Krystal Member of Dumbledore's Army I've Been to Paradise But I've Never Been to Me Posts: 218	Cat's Tale Jul 26, 2005 1:26:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Krystal on Jul 26, 2005 1:26:27 GMT -5 I missed an update but in a way I'm glad to get the agony over in one read instead of suffering twice. You did do a good job with Phoebe so I appreciate that but I'd like a few minutes alone with Daniel.
	All Roads Lead Home When You Stay On The Right Path

QuillofMinerva
Professor of Transfiguration

Albus' Crumpet

Sailing the AD/MM ship proudly!

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Cat's Tale Jul 26, 2005 2:08:15 GMT -5

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Post by QuillofMinerva on Jul 26, 2005 2:08:15 GMT -5

That was a really hard chapter to read and I did shed some tears as Phoebe was telling Albus and Minerva to be happy and to love each other, that was very brave and unselfish of her.

I wonder what happens now......I have a feeling it may take a while for Albus to realise his feelings for Minerva.I can see them being friends for a few months and then suddenly the penny drops!

Update soon

Clayre x

'There was no body else to tell. Dumbledore had gone, Hagrid had gone, but he had always expected Professor McGonagall to be there, irascible and inflexible, perhaps, but always dependably, solidly present,'

Nerweniel Headmistress One of the Founders Aimer, ce n'est pas regarder l'un l'autre, c'est regarder ensemble dans la m?me direction. Posts: 797	Cat's Tale Jul 26, 2005 6:04:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Nerweniel on Jul 26, 2005 6:04:55 GMT -5 Why does Phoebe have to be so freaking nice sniff? Anyways, great update, I hope Albus & Min can get over the guilt together . Love, Lies
	~Don't Mess With A Headmistress~ "I will go down with this ship, and I won't put my hands up and surrender. There will be no white flag above my door." Notorious Maggie Smith obsessive!

JKMcGonagall Professor of Transfiguration "It unscrews the other way, Peeves." Minerva McGonagall (OotP) Posts: 623	Cat's Tale Jul 26, 2005 15:41:26 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by JKMcGonagall on Jul 26, 2005 15:41:26 GMT -5 I am so sorry that Phoebe is gone, but I am glad she gave Albus and Minerva her blessings. I hope that they will be able to move on eventually. Looking forward to more updates. Kay
	And it seems to me you lived your life (Albus) Like a candle's golden flames, Never fading with the sunset, When Dark times appeared. But, your footsteps will always fall here, Along Hogwarts hallowed halls, And, though your magic may be gone, Your legend never will. (My tribute to Albus Dumbledore, with thanks to Elton John's song, Candle in the Wind.)

Jaya Professor of Transfiguration Posts: 484	Cat's Tale Jul 26, 2005 18:47:01 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jaya on Jul 26, 2005 18:47:01 GMT -5 entry deleted
	Last Edit: Jun 5, 2007 15:43:20 GMT -5 by Jaya ~*~ Dance as if no one were watching, Sing as if no one were listening, And Live every day as if it were your last. Irish Proverb

Krystal Member of Dumbledore's Army I've Been to Paradise But I've Never Been to Me Posts: 218	Cat's Tale Jul 26, 2005 19:17:25 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Krystal on Jul 26, 2005 19:17:25 GMT -5 I finally beat Kandie to the update first. I'm hoping to hear what they talk about tonight. (hint hint)
	All Roads Lead Home When You Stay On The Right Path

Lady Lavendar Head Girl Posts: 331	Cat's Tale Jul 26, 2005 19:26:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lady Lavendar on Jul 26, 2005 19:26:24 GMT -5 Nice update! Hope to see the next part soon! LL
	We can all take a lesson from crayons. Some are beautiful, some are ugly, some are bright, some are dull, and some have weird names but they have all learned to live in the same box.

Kandice Preparing for N.E.W.T.s That's why they call me.....the Leader of the Pack Posts: 372	Cat's Tale Jul 26, 2005 19:45:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kandice on Jul 26, 2005 19:45:24 GMT -5 Krys didn't beat me to the update. She locked me out of the room! I am happy that Cat is enjoying Albus so much. I hope Minerva lets him in closer.
	Do you know where you're going to? Do you like the things that life is showing you?

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