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Post by JKMcGonagall on Jul 28, 2005 12:26:31 GMT -5
I loved the exchange between Min, Poppy, and Hooch. It was wonderful. I also liked the way Hooch finally figured out that Cat was Albus' daughter. That was a hoot.
More updates please!!!!
Kay
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Post by LadyJolly on Jul 28, 2005 14:43:19 GMT -5
This is wonderful!! They are finally MARRIED that's really good ehhehehe and I am glad that they finally worked things out. Hope you'll post up your next chapter and it'll be about their wedding night ;D Lady Jolly
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Post by bee. on Jul 28, 2005 16:02:43 GMT -5
im so glad they're married now!...it's about time... and i think i laughed about every time hooch talked. especially when she wanted to dump cat off at poppy's, if she stuffed her face and got sick. oh gooooodness... post soon! ecks oh ecks oh, bee
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Post by Jaya on Jul 28, 2005 17:49:46 GMT -5
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Post by TartanPhoenix on Jul 28, 2005 18:02:02 GMT -5
Very very nice . I love this story! I never realized Albus could be such a tease. Post again soon.
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Post by Alesia on Jul 28, 2005 19:43:08 GMT -5
You're not really stopping there are you? ??!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please tell me there is another update on the way TONIGHT!! If I make Krys review will you update again? <she runs off to PM Krys>
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Post by Kandice on Jul 28, 2005 20:22:29 GMT -5
Did we stop in the middle! How cruel!
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Post by Krystal on Jul 28, 2005 20:23:50 GMT -5
* Takes out her wand* I command you to post! *holsters wand*
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Post by Jaya on Jul 28, 2005 21:29:28 GMT -5
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Post by mugglemin on Jul 28, 2005 21:29:32 GMT -5
man...connection's been down for a week, so I had a lot to catch up on! I'm looking forward to the rest of the lemon!!
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Post by Jaya on Jul 28, 2005 21:31:22 GMT -5
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Post by Kandice on Jul 28, 2005 21:48:00 GMT -5
So worth the interruption. You are such a great lemon writer. I think I'll go see what Rich is doing...
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Post by Krystal on Jul 28, 2005 21:49:48 GMT -5
I can only say WOW! I can't believe my wand really works! :-)
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Post by Ginger Newts on Jul 28, 2005 21:55:42 GMT -5
I was advised there had been half a lemon posted and waited "patiently" for the rest to join it before reading any of it. Boy am I glad I did, it was well worth it. Wonderful lemon, of course, and I'm very much enjoying this new peaceful part of the story.
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Post by Alesia on Jul 28, 2005 22:04:04 GMT -5
Holy Cow Girl!!!! That was incredible!!
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Post by TartanPhoenix on Jul 28, 2005 22:11:25 GMT -5
OMG I got back from my run and found t his. Let me tell you it did nothing for my cool down. You write the best lemons. Keep it up.
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Post by Hogwarts Duo on Jul 28, 2005 22:18:10 GMT -5
Woooowwwwww! That was the best update to date! That was fantastic and certainly caused the temperature to rise in this house. ^_^
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Post by QuillofMinerva on Jul 29, 2005 1:59:14 GMT -5
wow that was brilliant *fans self*
and another dumbledore on the way...will it be a little boy?
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Post by Nerweniel on Jul 29, 2005 4:48:32 GMT -5
Aaaaw, a new baby Dumbledore coming ;D! Absolutely fabulous lemon... woohoo ! Love, Lies
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Post by Jaya on Jul 29, 2005 22:03:05 GMT -5
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Post by Krystal on Jul 29, 2005 22:10:03 GMT -5
A very good ending to a wonderful yet sad story. I loved all the emotions I experienced while reading this story (except for the death of Phoebe) and I can't wait for more from you. Krys
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Post by TartanPhoenix on Jul 29, 2005 22:23:19 GMT -5
The ending was perfect. I really liked the way you tried to explain about Phoebe. I think sometimes we forget just what children can and cannot understand or remember, but you did a wonderful job of bringing everything out. I can't wait to read more from you. I don't suppose you're thinking about a sequel?
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Post by Alesia on Jul 29, 2005 22:47:25 GMT -5
Jaya,
You did this soo well. I am sorry to see it end but the last chapter was extremely touching. The interaction between Albus and Minerva was very touching. Cat's conversation with her father was sentimental and sweet. You chose a tough subject for them to cover and did it very very well.
I would very much like to see as many stories as you are willing to write.
Bonnie
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Post by Sensiblyquirky on Jul 29, 2005 23:03:51 GMT -5
Perfect. A tough conversation indeed, but you handled it so nicely. I've enjoyed this story very much, and agree with the others: can't wait to see more from you!
Christy
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Post by QuillofMinerva on Jul 30, 2005 3:01:53 GMT -5
Oh must admit that I am so sad to see this story end but it has been brilliant and I have enjoyed it from start to finish. I think Albus handled those questions very well and I am glad they are a family. I would love to see a sequel...a one shot piece about the twins though Clayre x
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Post by Kandice on Jul 30, 2005 4:03:43 GMT -5
I am so sad that its over. I enjoyed looking forward to your updates and now my world is empty. (I hope you are taking pity on me and preparing to start another story!) Kandie
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Post by Nerweniel on Jul 30, 2005 4:11:11 GMT -5
This is such a magnificent story ! I just loved everything about it, even the sad parts, because you wrote them so wonderfully. Great job, hope we see much more from you soon ;D! Love, Lies
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Post by Hogwarts Duo on Jul 30, 2005 9:36:27 GMT -5
LIke so many others before me, I am also sad to see this story end. I have eagerly anticipated each update, checking frequently to see if you had added anything else.
The story was so well written and thought out and it showed with each and every section of it. And I particularly liked the way you used the flashback. All in all...A GREAT JOB!
Ang.
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Post by Mellypoo622 on Jul 30, 2005 15:19:52 GMT -5
Like you said "All good things must come to an end." I wish they didn't have too! Especially in this case! This story was incredible!!! It was so well written, and I loved the plot!
It was so interesting how you made Pheobe a good person and not turn evil. It kept me hooked the whole time, trying to figure out how you were going to get Pheobe out of the picture so ADMM could be together, and the way you did it suprised me! I love surprises in a story! I like when they aren't predictable and this was not! Amazing story!!
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Post by LadyJolly on Jul 30, 2005 18:38:31 GMT -5
This is such an AWESOME STORY!!! And yet it had to come to an end. I truly enjoyed this greatly and your such wonderful write as well as an lemon write!! ehhehe
It was so sad in the beginning but it end out for the best and was the Best ending;D love the story so much and it's plot is just...it surprised me at times how good it was heheheh I have to say this story was fulled with everything. Love(lots of it) sadness, anger, everything and it's really well writem Keep on writing.
Lady Jolly
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