chell
Gryffindor Seeker
Whenever one door closes, another one opens
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Post by chell on Apr 9, 2006 18:21:48 GMT -5
Excellent chapter! (although a tad creepy in places) I just realized I haven't reviewed this story at all yet, so not only was this an excellent chapter, but the story is excellent as well. I'm enjoying it, although I hope Luc dies a horrible death!
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Post by mcgonagallrocks on Apr 9, 2006 18:27:45 GMT -5
That creep(Luc) needs to be in Azkaban for the rest of him life!!! Love it but as chell said a bit creepy in places. Update soon.
**Endora
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Post by littlemorgsi on Apr 9, 2006 18:44:17 GMT -5
Go Minerva! I'm glad Luc is getting what he deserves.
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Post by Trulyamused on Apr 9, 2006 19:14:18 GMT -5
Oh yes!! Excellent.
KO'd by Min. Brilliant.
Needed that tonight.
Thanks Jaya.
Truly
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Post by Isabelle on Apr 9, 2006 20:25:48 GMT -5
This was awesome, Jaya, as always! I loved how Minerva reeled back and punched Luc. My mum did that to a guy who almost ran over me with a waverunner when I was about three years old.
I am so glad that there is a happy end to this scene at the courtroom. Well sort of. I hope Ian comes around soon. I have a feeling this isn't going to be the end of the hard times for their family.
Great job!
Liz
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Post by Herzele on Apr 10, 2006 15:15:11 GMT -5
Wow ! You go, Min !! ;D
I'm certainly glad that Luc didn't get custody of the children ... That would have been horrible ... And hopefully Ian will come around soon ...
Wonderful update !
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Post by Trulyamused on Apr 19, 2006 20:41:41 GMT -5
Nice scene. I love the comment about Min's cooking. (chuckle)
Looking forward to more.
Truly
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Post by littlemorgsi on Apr 19, 2006 21:49:01 GMT -5
Loved the line about Minerva's cooking. It made me laugh.
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Post by tanja on Apr 20, 2006 4:42:35 GMT -5
Luckily it turned out in a positive way, most of it that is, and surely they will also copy with the things to come. And I´m also glad that Albus kept his humour ;D So, I´m looking very forward  |
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Post by Herzele on Apr 20, 2006 9:20:33 GMT -5
Yay ! An update ! I'm so glad that Fiona understands ... And it's really good to see that they can still joke around ...  |
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Post by Alesia on Apr 25, 2006 22:14:48 GMT -5
I just got caught up with the last update. The way you had Minerva handle the explanation to Fee about her uncle and what he wanted to do seemed very much how the two of them would handle something like that. Of course the fact Minerva can't cook is very funny.
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Post by zoeteproet on Apr 29, 2006 5:37:03 GMT -5
Wauw, I was a little bit behind with this story, but the last chapters I read were all very good! I like your writing style.
The plot of the story is wonderful, you got me hooked.
Love,
Sarah
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Post by Trulyamused on Apr 30, 2006 17:06:24 GMT -5
Oh, man. What happened?
I feel like Fee and Ian.
Need to know the whole story.
Soon please,
Truly
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Post by Herzele on Apr 30, 2006 17:21:36 GMT -5
I agree : That was a cruel place to stop ....
I'm very glad Ian is at least listening to them ... Hopefully he'll believe them ...
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Post by Alesia on Apr 30, 2006 20:20:01 GMT -5
All Hail the Evil Queen of Cliffhangers - Jaya!!!
tayryn - I will send you all of BSG through the end of season two on DVD if you make Jaya post the next chapter!!!!!
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Post by tayryn on Apr 30, 2006 21:26:51 GMT -5
All Hail the Evil Queen of Cliffhangers - Jaya!!! tayryn - I will send you all of BSG through the end of season two on DVD if you make Jaya post the next chapter!!!!! LOL!! oh come now... who do you think advises her where to stop?! she's not that cruel in real life... i'm the evil one of this duo! well... i give you points for trying! lol it is a damn good story, isn't it!? my friend is incredibly talented... and can weave quite the compelling tale, eh?? |
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Post by tanja on May 1, 2006 6:36:56 GMT -5
that´s such a cruel point to stop !!! PLEASE go on very soon. It´s so damn interesting !!!
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chell
Gryffindor Seeker
Whenever one door closes, another one opens
Posts: 41
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Post by chell on May 1, 2006 9:11:20 GMT -5
I agree. That was very cruel indeed. Nonetheless, I am enjoying this story very much and you have me hooked! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the whole story of Minerva and Albus' adventure.....
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Post by tanja on May 6, 2006 4:47:24 GMT -5
very good and thrilling update, but again the cruelest point to stop. Hoping for more to come very soon |
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Post by Herzele on May 6, 2006 8:03:37 GMT -5
Wonderful update ! That is a really fantastic story !
Poor Min ... It must've been horrible for her to be the one to find the body ...
I can't wait to read more !!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Trulyamused on May 6, 2006 9:39:35 GMT -5
Ooohhh . . .more please.
What happens to Minerva? Good to see the kids are finally getting it.
Hope too see more soon.
Truly
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Post by Trulyamused on May 6, 2006 20:51:08 GMT -5
Oh my, poor Min.
I hope Albus comes back soon.
Great piece.
Truly
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Post by TartanPhoenix on May 6, 2006 22:55:40 GMT -5
I have an inkling as to that whack jobs odd behavior, but I suppose you're going to make me wait for another superb update. Each one never fails to make me giddy.
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Post by tanja on May 7, 2006 4:39:40 GMT -5
So sad. So intersting. So damn good. So bad you stoped here...
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Post by Herzele on May 7, 2006 6:26:30 GMT -5
That was, once again, a cruel place to stop ... Hopefully Albus will rescue her soon !!
Great update !
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Post by Stoneygem on May 10, 2006 13:57:36 GMT -5
Hey...is that a *gasp* review from *gasp* ME?!
Yes it is... ;D and i can only say: BRILLIANT!!!!!! Stunningly brilliant...
Can't wait for more...don't want to wait for more...pretty please...
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Post by zoeteproet on May 11, 2006 12:54:44 GMT -5
Very powerfully written.
I'm really scared for what will happen to Min, I hope Albus will save her soon.
Eagerly awaiting an update!
Love,
Sarah xx
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Post by lemonygingersnaps on May 16, 2006 22:09:35 GMT -5
WOW - I love this - I need more! :-)
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Post by Trulyamused on May 17, 2006 20:16:23 GMT -5
Yea, Albus to the rescue.
Wonderful part.
Hope to read more soon.
Truly
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Post by Alesia on May 17, 2006 21:29:10 GMT -5
I like the tie with Tom Riddle. I am interested in what nasty old Muggins is up to with breeding his own army - Doesn't that take awhile? As always I love the complexity of the story you have created. And is that a lemon I see on the horizon?? |
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