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Post by moonchild on Mar 4, 2006 22:06:25 GMT -5
that was long!  But good! now i'm hooked  |
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Post by Trulyamused on Mar 4, 2006 23:11:02 GMT -5
Oh yeah, this is remarkable. Exceptional. Bloodly Brilliant.
ANd I do so love LOOONNGG stories.
Hope to read very, very soon.
Truly
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Post by Isabelle on Mar 5, 2006 12:24:33 GMT -5
Wowsers!! I do love your stories, Jaya. Are all of your updates going to be that long??? I like this story very much so far. It is an interesting idea. I love Allie, such a fitting name. *wink* I hope you update soon!! Liz
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Post by nemi on Mar 5, 2006 14:02:03 GMT -5
This is brilliant! It has just the right amounts of each genre and it has a fantastic plot. Keep it up!
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Post by Jessabelle on Mar 5, 2006 14:10:48 GMT -5
Haha .. I love Albus in this fic.! This is a very good and well developed fic. already! Please update again soon! - Jess  |
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Post by tanja on Mar 5, 2006 15:41:31 GMT -5
Very interesting beginning...I´m looking forward |
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Post by Orion's Guard on Mar 5, 2006 20:22:50 GMT -5
I've followed your other stories, and was recently thinking of going back and rereading due to lack of newer stories, so I'm especially glad you came up with this one. Luc seems familiar, and I'd really like to see some time with Ian and Fiona, I imagine their characters will be (have been) hard to write. Thanks!
Danielle
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Post by Alesia on Mar 5, 2006 21:57:37 GMT -5
Wooo Hooo, Jaya's back!!!!!!!!
I am very excited about this and you gave us a HUGE piece to start with. What an interesting plot! You got me that is for sure.
The scene of the angry Albus was especially good.
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Post by tayryn on Mar 12, 2006 21:41:54 GMT -5
you are not the worst friend in the world... YOU are the best!! and i am merely a passable beta...
however, this is yet another brilliant story by you, my friend. (yes, i am biased, but tis the truth!)
and... i can't wait for the next part! yes... i've read it... and i know what it is... and...
*licks lips for the tangy treat to come*
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Post by Trulyamused on Mar 12, 2006 22:19:29 GMT -5
Excellent!! Awaiting more. Bring on the lemons. <g>
Truly
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Post by tanja on Mar 13, 2006 6:48:23 GMT -5
promising chapter well done |
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Post by Isabelle on Mar 13, 2006 12:50:26 GMT -5
Now, if I was Minerva, I'm sure I'd do the same thing. Lucky there are those few stars, but I'm sure she won't care very much as soon as... well, you know. Anyway, lovely update. I look forward to the next part. I really hope Luc loses the hearing.  Update soon! Liz |
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Post by Jessabelle on Mar 13, 2006 22:30:16 GMT -5
I like the description of the bride and groom cake toppers and Minerva's reaction to them was so very true to character! Please update again soon! - Jess |
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Post by littlemorgsi on Mar 14, 2006 3:17:54 GMT -5
You have me hooked. I hope this isn't too angsty though. Minerva seems set to get herself killed.
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Post by gingerkitten on Mar 14, 2006 9:59:46 GMT -5
I'm really enjoying this! Please update soon!
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Post by TartanPhoenix on Mar 14, 2006 10:04:39 GMT -5
Another wonderful chapter. I really enjoyed the cake toppers; they were perfect. Can't wait for the next update.
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Post by Herzele on Mar 17, 2006 16:36:34 GMT -5
I just realised I never let you know how much I loved the first part of the story ... Shame on me ...  It's another wonderful story from you and I most certainly can't wait to read more !!!! I love it ! |
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Post by zoeteproet on Mar 18, 2006 8:29:26 GMT -5
I totally agree with Herzele! Wonderful story, indeed.
I hope Albus beats Luc his ass.
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Post by DumbledoresKitten on Mar 27, 2006 4:34:13 GMT -5
Haven't posted in a while but believe me this story is worth it. I love your writing style to no end. I love the plot and can't wait to see where you go next with it. Also loved the smut! The idea with Poppy and the nightgown was great.
please post again soon.
cat
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Post by Isabelle on Mar 27, 2006 16:26:21 GMT -5
Nice chapter! Why was Albus so reluctant to allow Minerva to reciprocate? That was a little fuzzy to me. Maybe I'm just too tired to read between lines, who knows? Great chapter though!!
Liz
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Post by Trulyamused on Mar 27, 2006 16:50:30 GMT -5
Energy (power) potion. Chuckle. No way Albus needs that. Besides, it reminds me of Ming the Merciless.  Great stuff, Jaya as always. Looking forward to more soon. Truly |
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Post by Herzele on Mar 28, 2006 14:54:46 GMT -5
What a wonderful hot and steamy update !
Exactly the thing I needed today ... It's raining and freezing here ...
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Post by Alesia on Mar 29, 2006 12:46:44 GMT -5
Jaya,
I am enthralled with this story and your work in general. But I do have one question. Having read both "Cat's Tale" and "Time and Again" both of which contain multiple lemons of their own, the tone and beat of this lemon feels different. Did you construct this chapter with the intention of there being an underlying tone of desperation and angst?
Although both Albus and Minerva love each other, it seems to me between them there is still the underlying knowledge of what comes next and that unwanted (but in each of their minds necessary) deception has somehow worked itself into their need to express themselves physically in an unspoken but forced and driven way. I guess my question is did you put it there on purpose or am I over reading it?
Alesia
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Post by Jaya on Mar 29, 2006 22:39:49 GMT -5
WOW!
You are very observant... Thank you!
Actually... you are right... I can't really say that every bit of this lemon was plotted out for that specific purpose... but I knew what was coming next... and that definitely influenced the tone of this scene... I didn't want a wonderful perfect lemon... because the angst is definitely not over yet... there are still 130 or so pages of this story left... and marriage isn't the cure to all of our couple's woes... in fact... it might create some new ones...
Thanks for the feedback and I hope that you... all of you... continue to find enjoyment in my stories...
Hopefully I will have another fairly large post up this weekend.
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Post by Trulyamused on Apr 3, 2006 20:24:18 GMT -5
Jaya,
This was wonderful. Short. But that's okay.
Get yourself back on an even keel . . . we'll still be here.
Take care, lady,
Truly
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Post by Jaya on Apr 3, 2006 20:32:40 GMT -5
Thanks Truly...
there will be more soon...
I appreciate the kind words...
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Post by Isabelle on Apr 3, 2006 20:54:30 GMT -5
This was a lovely update! Short, but I know there are even better installments to come. I hope your days turn out better soon. If not, just just screw it, and let it all go! I like doing that once in a while. Thoroughly scares everyone because I'm known to be very quiet. I look forward to your next part!
Liz
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Post by TartanPhoenix on Apr 4, 2006 7:41:07 GMT -5
Another great update. I will certainly be interested to see what happens next. I hope your week gets better.
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Post by Herzele on Apr 4, 2006 11:42:44 GMT -5
Wonderful update ! This just keeps getting more interesting ... I can't wait to read more !
Hope you'll feel better soon !
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Post by Jessabelle on Apr 4, 2006 19:56:08 GMT -5
The trial should be interesting! Please update again soon!
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But good! now i'm hooked 
